Blog 15: Rough cut

We were the first to present our project on the prescreen, and we received 18 paper-based responses and some oral feedback.

These are four responses that actually say something. Overall, the audience seems pretty satisfied with our visual presentation qualities, but many of them reflect on the lack of clarity of our plot. Unfortunately, we do not have any budget left to refilm the footage of Louis singing, so the "lip syncing was off" was useful, but we no longer have the ability to fix that but to edit the speed. It should get things a bit better, but it won't help much.

I also noticed that some people mentioned that some of our cuts are short, which makes certain objects hard to identify. I will go back and fix the length of the axe shot, and the goat shot so that audiences can understand more easily.

In terms of oral feedback, except for compliments, we get a feed from our drama teacher saying: "I was expecting Louis to blow the condom till explode", which is pretty hilarious, and we will make that an extra chapter when we are done with these blogs.